Sunday, January 18, 2009

The Importance of Correct Punctuation

Dear Charles:
I want a man who knows what love is all about. You are generous, kind, thoughtful. People who are not like you admit to being useless and inferior. You have ruined me for other men. I yearn for you. I have no feelings whatsoever when we're apart. I can be forever happy--will you let me be yours?
Gloria

Dear Charles:
I want a man who knows what love is. All about you are generous, kind, thoughtful people, who are not like you.
Admit to being useless and inferior. You have ruined me. For other men, I yearn. For you, I have no feelings whatsoever.
When we're apart, I can be forever happy. Will you let me be?
Yours,
Gloria

2 comments:

  1. I love it! Very clever - did you write it?

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  2. Sadly, no. I did not write this post; however, I appreciate the beauty of it so much that I could not help but share in this semi-public forum. :)

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